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Kurumanjang City
Ola Keng
Eposi my dear,
How are you doing today? I am writing to express the strong love I have for you especially this 14th February. Mrs Eposi, you are different form plenty girls because your beauty is unspeakable and your voice always melts my heart and make it to skip a bit. Eposi, on this day, I offer you my heart as a Valentine’s Gift praying that the almighty will be blessing you and keep you alive for me. You don’t know how much I care for you because if you know, you will not be sleeping one day without calling.
Bye for now.
Faithfully Yours,
Ola
Extracted from Cameroon GCE 2025
Correction
Kurumanjang City
Ola Keng
Dear Eposi,
How are you doing today? I am writing to express the deep love I have for you, especially on this 14th of February. Mrs Eposi, you are different from many girls because your beauty is beyond words and your voice always melts my heart and makes it skip a beat/leap. Eposi, on this day, I offer you my heart as a Valentine’s gift, praying that the Almighty will bless you and keep you alive for me. You don’t know how much I care for you because if you did, you would not sleep for one day without calling.
Bye for now.
Yours Sincerely,
Ola Keng
Corrections made
- Eposi my dear – Dear Eposi (correct letter greeting format)
- Strong love – deep love (more natural to read)
- especially this 14th February – especially on this 14th of February (correct preposition and date expression)
- form plenty girls – from many girls (correct word choice)
- your beauty is unspeakable – your beauty is beyond words (unspeakable has a negative connotation)
- make it to skip a bit – makes it skip a beat/leap (correct verb agreement and expression)
- Valentine’s Gift – Valentine’s gift (common noun)
- almighty will be blessing – Almighty will bless (superior being)
- if you know – if you did (correct conditional structure)
- will not be sleeping one day – would not sleep for one day (correct tense and meaning)
- yours faithfully – Yours sincerely (the name Eposi was mentioned)