WHY THIS IS BAND 8

  1. Task Achievement: All key features and data included. Clear overview with no numbers.
  2. Cohesion: “Overall”, “By contrast”, “However” used well. 2 clear detail paragraphs.
  3. Vocabulary: proportion, peaked, reversal, steadily, significantly, accommodation.
  4. Grammar: Mix of past tenses, comparatives, complex sentences: While ownership had become…, before experiencing…
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